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Submitted: September 13, 2012
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:PCM: Creamcheesieby =FootsiePajamas

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_{Point Commission for =CreamCheesie- Her OC Louise. [link]

So I'm going back to my old style, I'll still draw in the other chibi style every now and again.
Ugh, I still think this is pretty terrible, orz.
But if I didn't finish it soon then I would've forgot about it. ಥnಥ
Sorry if I got anything wrong.

Now- I must continue to level my Eden Eternal Character up- AWAY~!

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Louise (c) =CreamCheesie
Drawing (c) me
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Sai- 15 minutes
Edited in PAINT.NET}}

Critique by !BombPrincess Nov 16, 2012, 7:30:35 AM

I would like to start by saying that her eyes are beautiful! Very well done. The blush on the face is subtle and sweet, and her proportions are nice.
The critiques that I have to offer are mainly about your highlighting and your linework.
The definining lines of the hair seem sketchy and messy, but that's an easy fix. I would spend more time cleaning up your linework, and maybe adding more defining lines to the hair (because right now it's a little bland).
The highlights on the clothes and on the hair don't really make sense. While light does reflect off of those surfaces, it isn't harsh or splotchy. If you're using SAI, trying using the watercolor tool and marker tool for your highlights, and place the lights on the hair so that it looks lik the hair is actually flowing.
(And finally) Her right arm (our left) seems thicker than the other arm. Also, her hairline may be pushed too far back. You could move the eyebrows lower, and move the hairline down with them.
All in all, this is really nice, and that almost all of this critique revolved around lines and highlights is a great thing. Your Chibi anatomy is fine, and you've proven that you can draw eyes like a master. I would just spend some more time making the rest of the clothing and hair reflect how vibrant and interesting the eyes are. Keep up the good work! You're doing great.

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